one crossover instead of two.
seemingly unnecessary loop from the top removed.
Just a couple of suggestions on re-routing for simplification.
Will probably attempt a go at Domain at some point! I like a challenge =P Are suggestions like this good though? Or are people used to where the systems are and so any movement of them would cause disruption? I assume the simplification outweighs the initial un-used-to-ness (can't remember if there's a word for that!), though I could be assuming wrong.
Any responses would be good before I attempt Domain! Many hours and sheets of scribbles I can see lie ahead of me!
Edit: Would help to say the first is for The Bleak Lands and the second is for Deklein.

